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DemonAngel26

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Here's something that i've been currently working on.



A story, which i'm planning to have 19 chapters one, and all i have are 3.



the story mainly revolves a girl named Spy and all the craziness that surrounds her.



And so... the first chapter





Chapter 1



It



This is it she thought as she stared at her self infront of the mirror placing cherry lip gloss on nice and easy. Her hair was all nicely combed, and her black dress couldn't go with it any better. This is it



The thought of seeing him again after a long going argument made her think of her priorities, there are things that they both like, and things that are just far off one sided. I've made up my mind



She took one last look at the mirror as she shut the light close followed by a quick push on the door as she made her way out of her apartment.



Every step that she took felt heavier and heavier as she was getting closer at there said meeting place. Focus SPY focus she said as she deflected her thoughts from the piercing stares of everyone around her, they were like tiny needles poking you and poking you until you finally bleed and scream out loud I've made up my mind



With a little yell her imaginary thought turned reality, with a little outburst they all stared at her, for real this time, but she kept on walking as she finally saw the familiar figure, of a boy she's sworn to love till eternity does them part.



Her heart kept pounding faster and faster, for she did love him, or living him still, but she had to put and end to it, she just had to get over this cliff. Trent.. he was looking a far as if he didnt see her at all Your late was his first word.



Of all the words to say to your all so loyal girl friend who even took the initiative to dress up for you to make her presence grow even by just a little, you just had to kill it off... did you.



Well, i walked thinking of the which words to say, she stumbled upon two paths, one is to act all bitchy, and the other was to just act like she always does 'tolerate him'



she chose to tolerate him Its a waste of money to take a cab just to get here, figured its not that far, so i walked



Yet again, it was like her words meant nothing, like it just flew right through his ears. Well, you did want to talk... talk he then spoke the coldest words she never expected to hear ever coming from a boy who swore to love her back.



Whats your problem? with just that line, the flame grew larger Did i do something wrong by any chance? Cause i dunno, Trent, your the smart one, enlighten me.



They were silenced as a subway passed by but continued when it left again. I just... dont think i can love anyone who cant love me back... with those words she knew it, that was it... The It she didnt expect this early on there relationship.



Your breaking up with me? she yelled in her mind, she wanted to scream it all out, to slap him about and leave, but she froze, as if shocked releived, but deeply saddened by the fact that he said it.



Lets cool it off... and maybe see other people He continued as Spy just walked close to him and rested her right hand on his chest for one last time and left without a word.



This is it... she thought as she walked out of the subway station, loveless and emotionless. The it that never will be she continued as drops of rain began falling down from the skies, as if greaving for her.



But she thought otherwise I left my umbrella
 
Nice... My break ups never have went that way though.. Its usually a lot uglier.
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