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Lost [poem]

draco99

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Further and further, I drift away,
Into an aisle of oblivion;
An array of darkness: consuming.
A perpetual gazed fixed on the only thing that matters;
Hope.

Drifting; like a boat in a storm,
Like a flickering candle;
A dying flame.
Hope; it must be tamed
Must be restored…

Clank, these rattling shackles that bind me;
They should be broken, then,
Then it will return, the substance I long for,
So tantalising, so close; but it never comes.
Like a destroyed memory; ruptured times.

For now; I am nothing; a mere speck of dust.
When I escape this maze, the perpetual gaze.
When I break the chains, when I choose a new match,
When light sheds, when the flame lives.
I will not be what I am;
Lost.

~~~

Please comment! :D
 
That was excellent. Very well written and I hope you never feel lost! Brilliant and thank you for sharing! :clap:

+1
 
draco99 said:
Thanks :blush:

It was originally a piece of work for school a couple of weeks ago.
Did it get graded?
 
It was for school and I was bogged on ideas so I just thought I would make something depressing. Lol.
 
draco99 said:
It was for school and I was bogged on ideas so I just thought I would make something depressing. Lol.
Depress that teacher into giving you a good grade! :P
 
Nebulous said:
draco99 said:
It was for school and I was bogged on ideas so I just thought I would make something depressing. Lol.
Depress that teacher into giving you a good grade! :P

Haha, I most probably did. :halo:

Jazzy said:
draco99 said:
Yeah, I got an A :D
Well deserved! :clap:

Thanks Jazz :D

I have a poem about a peacock, that I might post. Lol.
 
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