As the sun went down,
a man entered like a hound.
He was looking for something,
that has been around since time began.
"I'm looking for a place."
He said in dire haste.
"Do any one of you know,
where it is?" Said the man.
The barman tried to reply,
but all that went out was a sigh.
The barman went back to,
his cup cleaning by the side.
Sitting at the back of the pub wall,
an old stockman was awaken by the stranger's call.
He noticed that the stranger,
was desperate his find.
I do need to continue on it, so the last verse may not make sense.
Is there any feed back you could give?
Full honest criticism allowed.
a man entered like a hound.
He was looking for something,
that has been around since time began.
"I'm looking for a place."
He said in dire haste.
"Do any one of you know,
where it is?" Said the man.
The barman tried to reply,
but all that went out was a sigh.
The barman went back to,
his cup cleaning by the side.
Sitting at the back of the pub wall,
an old stockman was awaken by the stranger's call.
He noticed that the stranger,
was desperate his find.
I do need to continue on it, so the last verse may not make sense.
Is there any feed back you could give?
Full honest criticism allowed.
