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Poems From an Ex

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Here are some poems that an ex wrote about me. She posted these on poetry.com



This one is titled Love Forever (when we were still together)



My love is like a flower,

That's growing really fast.

I hope your feelings are the same,

I want our love to last.



Your loving ways compare to the stars,

They light my every day.

Being together is all I want,

I hope you're here to stay.



My thoughts of you are deeply felt,

There's no way for me to show.

If I could hold you in my arms forever,

I'd never let you go.



There's something I found in you,

I saw it from the start.

I'm finally falling in love with you,

I love you with all my heart.






This one is titled Face it Love Hurts (after we broke up)



you hurt me once

you hurt me twice

but a third time will never be

now should it be my turn

now its time for your heart to burn

you said you loved me

you didnt mean it

did I misunderstand what a jerk you could be

maybe I did

maybe I was dumb

but not again

not with my love

my love is great

my love is kind

but my love has turned to hate

just like a crime

I loved you once

I even loved you twice

but not a third time

nope not a third time
 
The first one is okay, but the second sounds like lame angsty teen love.
 
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