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The Lost Ethan!

CommanderMadi

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All of the characters in this story are not real. I just created them using my mind.

A small description:-

Ethan, a 16 years old boy, lost his family when he was 4 years old, the life darkened into his face, he never thought that he will, one day, have to walk through this world alone. Here is his story

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Father, mother, where you gone?. A repeated sentence that never stopped for 12 years, it was Ethan crying and screaming the loss of his family. The family died in an epic crash, in a foreign country. It was a total mess for the little boy to live after them, in a country that he never got used to. The little kid kept roaming the streets, crying and blaming the world, for stealing his most beloved creatures in this planet. Not so long when Dryan (a 26 years old adult) passed by the little Ethan, and not so long either when Dryan burst into tears when he saw the kid laying on the ground, trembling in teared tears and saying Ma-m-m-a-a, do not leave me, I-I-I lo-lov-love you. Tears fallen, down and again. Dryan carried up the kid, and took him instantly into his house. The so-called house was a poorly designed and a poorly structured 4-walled house. Into there, there was Mrs.Erica and her two children, Elliot and Natalie. The poor Mr.Dryan was obliged to put a new 3rd child into the collection, Ethan, the new family member. Mrs.Erica was exclaiming at the very first moments she saw the kid held by her husband, but the mother heart started to work, and not so far when Mrs.Erica carried and hugged the little Ethan, and not so far either when she heard the story from her husband, she burst into tears, all of these queries happened in front of the 5 years old Elliot and the 3 years old Natalie. The kids never felt what it was all about because they were just too small to get it, however, their human feelings spread over their eyes, seeing a boy of their age crying loudly and trembling into fear, motivated them to go near to him. They hugged the little Ethan and told him Welcome to our family, little brother. Ethan the human, also felt the love and care from people he never saw before, affected by the affection provided by those small creatures and the big ones, he knew that he will survive in this world.



Next day morning, Ethan woke up early, but here the crying session started again, he never knew that he will wake up one day, and do not see his mother holding him and playing with him, he never felt one day, that he will wake up and do not kiss his father whilst he is wearing to go to work. All of these factors shared fair and square into building the little Ethan characteristics. But, he was influenced by his new family, more especially when the little kids ran to him and pulled his hands Come on, Ethan, come on, we are going to play in the garden. Ethan was a little kid, and his mind was not that strong and solid to keep doing the same thinking battles again and again, so he was impressed by getting his hands held by his new brothers, and went into the garden to play with them. He discovered that these people really loved him, more cute, he was able to talk and discuss many matters with this poor small family.



After then, that Ethan grow strongly, he learnt how to rely on himself from the handy Dryan who used to work as a carpenter, he acquired the love and the kindness from the great heart of his great mother Erica. Ethan life was completely changed and well, it went much more better than what he wanted.....



The End



Comments? All comments are welcome!.



Kindest Regards,

The Annoying Madi
 
Are you going to expand on this? Because this reads like a summary.

There's potential though
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I really like this and would love to read the full story.
 
The Annoying Madi said:
Yeah, thats a summary. Ima publish it all here in a PDF version once finished.
All righty then, I'll make sure to read it when you're done.
 
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