Writing an apology letter to a girl

[Awesomeslayerg]

I know I kinda bothered her a bit and wondered if she liked me or not one day she came up to me and said that she didnt want to be in a relationship which was a total misunderstanding and then she told me to stop talking about her and stuff but i cant stop thinking about what she said and stuff. Im wrote this letter in hopes of moving on because im moving schools and houses so i wont see her anymore.


Can someone please re-write it cause its a little disorganized and have grammatical issues.

http://pastebin.com/UnWcs83t

I would appreciate it

 

[DrLeftover]

I would send it to her as is.

It is YOU. If I rewrote it, even if I knew you personally, it wouldn't sound like you.

Run it through spellcheck, and send it.

It is your words, as you wrote them today, or yesterday, or whenever.

Your words are a reflection of who and What you are, Today.

Would you say the same thing next year? Probably not, but, you did today.

And that's what counts.

 

[Evil Eye]

I agree with DrLeftover to some extent.

In any case, I did a bit of spell/grammar checking: http://pastebin.com/jMB2exdE
Probably didn't get everything, but hey.

 

[Gizmo]

I agree with you Doctor Who.

I write things to my partner all the time and sometimes it isn't in the correct typing or even spelled correctly. It's the thought that counts.

If you show that you're professional at writing notes and she doesn't think you are then she will know you got help. Which will push her away even more.

Just be yourself. There's no harm in it.

 

[Awesomeslayerg]

The reason i did this is cause im moving away so it dosent matter if she takes this seriously or not. I wont see her ever again so ya

 

[Gizmo]

Good luck anyway whatever the outcome is.

 

[Awesomeslayerg]

Thanks alot. HOpe she takes it seriously.

 

[~KAGE-008]

Ok this reminds me of the bad year I had eleven years ago. And last year too.

I can't tolerate the fact some people IRL go through issues like this (dunno if in my case it was because of my Aspergers), hence why I'm feeling lonely right now.

 

[fiona1964]

Send it as it is she like it better that way

 

[Awesomeslayerg]

The only way i can probably send it to her is Via FB or have a friend give it ot her because now whenever i see her i end up having panic attacks.

 

[DrLeftover]

The reason i did this is cause im moving away so it dosent matter if she takes this seriously or not. I wont see her ever again so ya

You really can't say that.

Nobody has any idea what's coming down the road at us.

You may end up sitting next to her at work, or in college, or even in a restaurant at some point.

Something to think about before you start setting fire to bridges.

 

[samson]

Dude.. it's great letter.. I'm impress. You have no idea how much it reflects a situation where I currently find..

Remember to never give up!

 

[Bluezone777]

I find it strange that you claim that it matters how it is written then later say it doesn't matter because the person you are writing it to doesn't matter then go back and forth with statements of both kind. Which is it? If you didn't care then you wouldn't even bother to even write the note. The fact you did write it and now ask for advice says it matters much more then you let on. The best thing to do is to be you and you can't do that if someone else writes the letter. It's not about crossing the t's and dotting the i's but rather how well you properly convey the message and feelings you wish to convey through this letter. The rest don't really matter in the end.

Even if this means the end of this relationship doesn't mean it won't serve to benefit you later through the wisdom gained from the experience. Sometimes some relationships serve to strengthen and even bring forth the relationships yet to come so don't say it doesn't matte because it does mater even if it won't make a difference with your relationship with this girl.