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They are inspired by some of my experiences in life.
My Proboards platform is getting good traffic and my Wordpress is getting nothing. Anyway I wrote my first three scenes of Sam in the hospital https://thefinalradiant.proboards.com/board/27/sam-hospital-stay
After dealing with Dami Sam is exhausted and in his room quietly sobbing into his pillow. He hears the sound of the cart down the hall. A nurse knocks on the door and says in a calming voice “It’s lunchtime” Sam wipes away his tears, goes in the bathroom to wash his face. His eyes are red and he doesn’t really want to be seen but he heads down the hall to get his tray. He sits next to Natalie “Hi Sam, are you feeling okay?” “Not really but I’ll manage” he says while avoiding eye contact. She whispers in his ear “If you want to talk later I’m here okay?” Sam thanks her for being kind person and they start to eat. Sam looks down at his food, half an egg sandwich, a banana and jello. Sam thinks to himself “At least it’s better than breakfast was”. There, across from them is a petite elderly woman eating soup. Sam notices she keeps staring at Natalie’s neck. She suddenly says with no hesitation. “Why do you have an Adams apple?” Natalie gently touches her neck feeling uncomfortable. Sam says to the old woman “Excuse me!” “Why would you say that to someone you just met!?” “I just want to know if you’re a boy or a girl” Sam can’t believe her rudeness and says “It none of your business!” Ursula keeps going further and further getting more and more nasty. Until Sam had enough and says to her “You have NO class!” Ursula looks him straight in the eyes and says to him “An you have no soul!” Sam shouts “You’re unbelievable!”. The staff overheard the yelling and come in to ask what’s wrong. Sam is upset and says to the nurse what happened. The nurse tries to calm him down and decides it’s best to separate Natalie and Ursula and Sam from each other. Ursula says to the nurse “I lost my appetite” gets up and the nurse says to her “Come with me I’ll take you to your room” another nurse says to Sam “We’ll have a little talk” and she leads Sam down the opposite hallway. She asks Sam calmly “What happened there?” Sam is still upset and explains he never encountered someone who was so rude. The nurse says to him “All I’m allowed to say to you about Ursula is she’s not living in 2023. I suggest you avoid each other from now on”. Sam is tearing up right now and says to the nurse “This feels like jail you have no idea” the nurse still is trying to keep Sam calm and tells him “You’re not in jail your in the hospital. Different people are here for different reasons.” “You have your reason, Natalie is in for another reason and so is Ursula”. Sam decides to go for a cigarette and process what kind of place he’s in. He still feels he’s being punished and that they are giving Ursula special treatment because of her age. He think about Natalie and the hard time she is having. Sam comes in from his cigarette and goes into the tv room where Natalie is sitting. He asks her “How are you? Do you need to talk?” Sam invites her to another room where they can talk. Natalie says to him not to worry about her she’s heard worse things. Sam offers a hug to Natalie. She tells him she’s more concerned about him than herself. He tells her “I’m here for you” “And I’m here for you.”
Did some work on my character Natalie. She met a guy on the internet who admitted he’s a bit kinky. So for weeks he dresses her up and treats her like a dog. He starts off by getting her to do uncomfortable things then it leads to embarrassing things so she wouldn’t tell anyone. He feeds her opioids so she won’t leave easily. The point where Natalie has enough is when she feels her life is in danger. She gets away from him in a scene I’m saving for the book.[br][br]That’s why in hospital she’s given the methadone drink.
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