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Some Songs I Wrote A While Ago...

StevenF50

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Hello,



Here are some songs I wrote a long time ago:



I'm standing in the middle of this earth,

Looking around and around and around and around,

Looking at the vast universe,

Looking around and around and around and around.



We stand in this small little world,

Screaming Is there anyone there,

But no answer,

Coz we stand alone,

In this little world.



I'm standing in the middle of this earth,

Looking around and around and around and around,

Looking at the vast universe,

Looking around and around and around and around.



I sit in this little capsule,

Screaming is there anyone there,

But no answer,

Coz I stand alone,

In this little capsule.



We are alone,alone,alone,alone!

In this big universe!



Is there anyone out there?













Walking down the street,

With my best friend,

Watching the trees bend.



My lifes a stare,

A stare, a stare.

A long hard stare!



Climbing up a hill,

Don't EVEN CARE IF I'M ILL,

Just wanna stare at the view.



My lifes a stare,

A stare, a stare,

A long hard stare!



Running at top speed,

My friend banged his head on some bird feed,

But no time to help,

Gotta win, gottta stare at the trophy



My lifes a stare,

A stare, a stare

A long hard stare!

















In a world of shame,

Comes fame,

Glorious fame,



In a world of sorrow,

Comes tommorow!



In a world of pain,

Comes gain.



The world is not perfect but we need to think positive,

About our world.



In a world of death,

Comes breath.



In a world of war,

Comes galore.



In a world of fear,

Rolls a tear.



The world is not perfect but we need to think positive,

About our world.

Our glorious world!





And here is a work in progress:

You can't tell the future,no-o-o-o

You can't tell the future no-o-o-o

Or you'd be perfect



You just gotta a try and make that choice,

Just gotta try and hope for the best,

Because...



You can't tell the future no-o-o-o

You can't tell the future no-o-o-O

Or you'd be perfect



No time to look back,

Your choice is now!

No time to wait,

You gotta choose no,

It doesn't matter what you say,

Because...



You can't tell the future no-o-o-o

You can't tell the future no-o-o-O

Or you'd be perfect



Any improvements for my work in progress?



Thanks.
 
What about the last one, the one I'm working on I actually sang it and it does sound like a song not just a poem said in a singy way.
 
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